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Words at Times

Crows are just the sharpest.

4/5/2017

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They understand commerce,
give-and-take;
they know
that when someone gives you something
(like scraps of food)
they're going to want something in return.
They apprehend
that shiny things usually suffice.
 
Reception
invites reciprocation
invites repetition.
 
So they lay the bright things by,
waiting for the generous stoop-sitters
to give them a reason
to come down from the wire
and trade.


My first attempt at a dVerse prompt! This poem is a response to April 4th's "anthropomorphism" prompt. I hope I did this right!
9 Comments
Bjorn Rudberg
4/5/2017 09:07:42 pm

What skillful businessme, love crows (until they steal my stuff)

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Frank Hubeny link
4/5/2017 10:49:41 pm

The more I hear about crows the more I agree they are pretty smart.

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Lillian link
4/6/2017 04:01:10 am

Welcome to dVerse! Love your take on the prompt and do hope you'll join us again. We're a friendly bunch and after all, a virtual pub that gathers writers from across the globe makes for some imaginative imbibing of words!
Especially loved the last stanza here! I do think they love shiny objects and crows are quite amazing, all lined up on a telephone wire, cackling like a party line of old 😊 Much prefer your vision of them here than Alfred Hitchcock's Birds!
Come join us again - maybe today for Open Link Night. New prompts on Mondays, Tuesdays and Thursdays when the pub always opens at 3 PM Boston time,

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Rachel Rosenberg
4/6/2017 08:59:53 pm

Thank you for the kind welcome! I'm already excited for next week's prompts.

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lynn link
4/6/2017 06:27:33 am

Welcome to dVerse, Rachel! I enjoyed this take on crow commerce. You done good :)

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Anna :o] link
4/6/2017 10:12:07 am

Immensely clever write. Clever things they are, crows.
Kind regards
Anna :o]

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Beverly Crawford link
4/6/2017 11:47:47 am

A totally entertaining poem. I loved it!

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Jane Dougherty link
4/6/2017 01:15:28 pm

I enjoyed this poem. Crows are fascinating creatures and you captured their intelligent curiosity well.

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Marina Sofia link
4/7/2017 05:18:58 am

Belated welcome to dVerse, didn't have time to check out this prompt at the right time, so am doing it now, because I love the idea of it! I agree with you that crows are very clever and have an undeserved bad reputation (I'm looking at you, Mr. Poe!)

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