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UNDERGROUND: May 14, 2009: A Dream

5/23/2017

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 Ok! Today's dVerse prompt is "underground." It reminded me of a poem I wrote about a dream I had a long time ago. It was one of those vivid ones; reading the poem gives me flashes of images of the dream itself. The human brain is amazing, isn't it? 


May 14, 2009: A Dream
 
Humanity fled last night
to hives underground
to escape possible disease;
Americans shoved into shelves with impossibly small cracks to be shoved into by,
sealed in by the wires of their possessions,
wires shot across to submission by fierce, burnished androids who didn't shoot me,
who handed me a highlighter
and a card like a Commuter Rail ticket
and told me to count their shells,
to tally their averages.
 
The Androids, silver like they bathed in eye-shadow,
are impressed with my speed. I'm quick
“for a human” they said.
“I'm Ashkenazi” I said like that explained it,
and we—a man, a woman and I--
fled to the surface world un-pursued,
to poke around junkyards;
everything has been abandoned and it all ended up here and we wander,
picking through skis and docks,
trucks and mattresses and home telephones
until we find the little red car that might have been waiting for us
to ride away through towering alleyways
white with sunkissed snow.

16 Comments
lillian hallberg link
5/23/2017 12:32:33 pm

Glad you reposted this for the prompt! I think it could be a movie plot? A science fiction fantasy? And all the machines...sometimes I do think the human-ness in us is being subsumed by the technology we surround ourselves with. This said as I am typing this on my computer! :)

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Rachel Rosenberg
5/23/2017 12:48:38 pm

Thanks! I feel like it could be a movie too...lol, anyone want to write a script?

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Bjorn Rudberg
5/23/2017 12:38:14 pm

I love the details of this dream... I probably dream a lot but I can never remember any details... somehow this made me think of

Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep?

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Rachel Rosenberg
5/23/2017 12:49:55 pm

Yes, that makes sense. It's probably the androids, lol. It feels very Dante to me, too; people being sealed in by their own possessions is very "level of hell"ish.

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Kim M. Russell link
5/23/2017 12:52:25 pm

Wow, a futuristic nightmare. Scary lines:
'sealed in by the wires of their possessions,
wires shot across to submission by fierce, burnished androids...'

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Sabio Lantz link
5/23/2017 12:53:49 pm

Dreams offer bizarre connections.
Thanx for letting us know it was a dream
so we don't have to struggle for meaning.
Though I am curious if Sephardi Jews are less quick than you Ashkenazi by reputation? (smile)
You've got to really love someone to listen to their dreams everyday -- they always fascinate the dreamer more than the bed partner! ;-)

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paul scribbles
5/23/2017 01:37:09 pm

Perfect for the prompt Rachel. Such a vivid description of your dream and some interesting language to boot. Well penned.

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sherry blue sky link
5/23/2017 01:37:24 pm

Wow, you have very cool dreams. Mine mostly involve cleaning houses. LOL. Loved this.

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Rachel Rosenberg
5/23/2017 03:13:13 pm

Awww, lol. House cleaning dreams? Well, I'm glad you enjoyed this little piece of something different.

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Frank Hubeny link
5/23/2017 01:55:05 pm

Although I don't think we have to worry about the androids any more than the zombies, they could make an enjoyable dream or movie.

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Bev link
5/23/2017 03:05:24 pm

I'm impressed! My last dream was of the roofer we've called regarding the recurring leak in our dining room. I dreamed he handed me a card which read "Abandon hope, all ye who enter here!" Can we rent your little red car?

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Rachel Rosenberg
5/23/2017 03:16:20 pm

Thanks Bev! Your dream actually sounds interesting too; very creative and full of symbolism.

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Sascha Darlington
5/23/2017 04:03:06 pm

Beautiful images.

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Sarah Connor link
5/24/2017 02:02:36 am

This is so visual. I love the androids bathed in eye shadow, and that dream logic that isn't logic at all.

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Teresa link
5/24/2017 10:24:19 am

Fascinating! I want to hear more of the story.

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Eric Erb link
5/24/2017 06:08:40 pm

oo this appeals to my fascination with abandoned things/places/me

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